I thought: why not try doing a commentary if I have to repost the comic years after it's been a part of my life. I'll do my best not to comment on the state of the artwork; it is a product of my ability at the time. However, this is the updated artwork version that was made for the print release. Mostly it's added shadows and tweaked faces, aside from the additional pages. I drew this first page in 2013, and it's unchanged from then. I spent two years with the story flittering around my mind before I went in and made the rest.